This was a fun episode for me. There was no great crisis, but a lot of opportunities for individual characters to show some extra texture.
I laughed out loud when the picture of Big Mac and Smarty Pants was revealed. His switching places with Applerjack was a nice chance to show that his economy of speech is not due to a poverty of thoughts, but a reserve that takes serious motivation to get past.
Also, props for the extra touch on Rainbow Dash's spa experience. The way the gag with her hoof complex played out added a touch of tension and showed a bit of a vulnerability or hangup coming from an unusual direction for her.
The newspaper's print structure is kind of neat. To add variety, they flip the first letter, but this rule is negated when the second word is reversed. Also, the letter E is oddly flexible, sometimes dropping parts of itself or merging with the nearest vertical or near-vertical letter.
Headless Horse wrote:[*]"Twilight Sparkle: I Was a Canterlot Snob!" And here we dig back as far as Episode 1 for character-arc inspiration, not to mention some nice worldbuilding detail ("muddy roads and low-class rubes"). So much hidden character development to be dug out of this scene: Twilight now knows how far she's come and is pretty ashamed of the flaws she used to have (because let's face it, this would have been a pretty hard-hitting factual story, huh? Especially if told by Spike, her put-upon lackey back in Canterlot).
This one sounds like a fabrication after Gabby Gums had truly gone off the rails. I don't think Twilight ever had that kind of attitude, and the selection of that picture fits the general idea of a tabloid hit piece using a photo of her in the middle of a yawn or at the onset of a sneeze.
Scuderia Ferrarity wrote:
Sure make a joke that guys'll have to think about.
Oh God this is so surreal.
There's a reason why Pinkie was soaking in the tub. Per "A Friend in Deed", her hoofacures require two of those, and it creeps the other five right out.
Scuderia Ferrarity wrote:
"Celestia Just Like Us"
What does it MEEEEEEEEEAN? Does she occasionally order up two XXL sized cakes and pig out on them? Does she binge? Does she get frosting on her face?
I think it's interesting to use this gag. Celestia is the character with the greatest store of dignity in the series, so the payoff of taking her down even a fraction of a peg is low-hanging fruit. That has to be handled with care because of her role as a wise, nurturing, and a little mysterious background figure. Taking her down a full peg is in effect badmouthing every pony's mother.
A passage from Spike's diary:
Rarity, I like you like Celestia likes cake.
Going by the way the typewriters work in this series, I have the text of the final Gabby Gums article.
To the citizens of Ponyville:
010001100110111101110010 01110011011011110110110101100101 01110100011010010110110101100101 01101110011011110111011100101100 011110010110111101110101001001110111011001100101 01100010011001010110010101101110 01110010011001010110000101100100011010010110111001100111 01110100011010000110100101110011 011000110110111101101100011101010110110101101110
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