Pink and Famous

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Pink and Famous

Post by Orange Fluffy Sheep (?) » Wed Aug 15, 2012 9:21 pm

I'm not quite how, what with how few things I get, that something could fall through the cracks and get forgotten.

I'm a bit embarrassed.

Title: Pink and Famous
Type: Slice of Life
Synopsis: Rainbow Dash is famous for being a great flyer. Rarity is famous for being a great dressmaker. Pinkie Pie has lots of friends, but she doesn't have fame. When she decides that she wants to be as famous as her friends for being a party planner, things don't quite work out for her.
Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/36817/1 ... ny-Parties
Author: pjabrony
Submitted by: Weedgoku
Approved by: Kraps, Voidchicken
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Post by Wayoshi (?) » Wed Aug 15, 2012 11:00 pm

On phone right now, but synopsis is very intriguing, will edit post with my review later.

EDIT: The best one-shots are the ones whose concepts could make very good 22 min episodes, and this one really excelled there (would be towards end of series w/ Wonderbolt Dash). The commenters calling this boring are some of the dumber fans (what a surprise).

This quite frankly is a very possible conflict that can occur with the Mane 6, believable cause & result, even a social comment by AJ. An episode in particular would stretch the for-Pinkie party out as heavy rising action, with the first ponies leaving as the climax
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Post by Dal (?) » Thu Aug 16, 2012 2:08 pm

Ahhhhh the end!!! :awesomedash: I can count on one hand the times I have smiled like that.

Great story!
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Post by Yarma (?) » Sat Sep 01, 2012 8:36 pm

It stinks. It reads like an episode of the show, but one of the shitty episodes like mmmystery where nothing good happens.
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