Loops doesn't really make sense with how you had it. First she does an arc towards the camera, then she flies close and parallel to it. To illustrate, a shitty diagram:
From the top down, and the thing at the bottom is the camera. If you reverse either of them (and I suggest reversing 1), it makes more sense as a loop.
I'd also suggest inserting a small pause between 1 and 2. Just hold on the last frame of 1 for a little bit longer. Rainbow Dash is fast, but she can't teleport.
And this is incredibly nitpicky, but the orange stripe could probably be smoothed out and cleaned up, especially on the right.
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